Been much too long since I’ve posted to this blog. No excuses now. This evening, while sorting through one of the numerous stacks of documents that litter my apartment, I ran across this poem. I wrote it in the summer of 1975, when I was 17, shortly after graduating from high school. To my obviously biased judgment, it stands up about as well as most adolescent productions do (unless you’re Rimbaud or Dave Davies); and since the WWW is presumably a slightly more public and permanent medium than the fading piece of paper I have it on, I thought I’d reproduce it here:
Embrace The Water
Embrace the water Take it in your spindly arms and squeeze it to your breast As it slips through your crippled fingers Watch your shadow drip And watch the clumps of dirt around your feet wash away. Embrace the water As it spreads in tiny droplets on the surface of the glass Cup it in your hands And swirl the colored pigments in the ash-laden mud Smear it on your forehead And toss away your hair. Embrace the water Feel it as it swells the hollow place inside your breast And as it seeps into your desert skin feel in pounding in your veins And watch it all pour out upon the dried earth floor. Embrace the water Embrace the salty swirling eddies that skitter on spindly crab-legs from the pounding waves Embrace the pavement-washing rivers and the puddles cased in glass That slip through your stubborn toes.
Comments 2
except for the lack of a narrative arc (which it needs as it is not lyrical enough) & those homeriky adjectives, e.g., “pavement -washing” . . . it’s pretty good for a 17 yr old’s work
Posted 19 Nov 2005 at 4:27 pm ¶That was a very beautiful poem, I loved it.
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